Nightfall Stories

Fiction The Boy on the Bus · Chapter 4 of 8

Nine Stops

Marcus solved it on the Friday, and he solved it the way you solve anything on a bus, which is by counting.

He counts on and off at every stop. Every driver does; it is on the sheet. What he had never done is compare the two columns during the run, because there is no reason to — the numbers reconcile at the end, and if they reconcile you had a normal day.

On Friday he compared them at each stop.

Stops one through six: on and off balanced normally, allowing for the ones who only ever get on.

Stop seven — Halloran Road, a crossroads with a feed store, four houses and a church — he had one more off than he could account for.

Stop seven is twenty-two minutes into a forty-minute run. It is nowhere. The feed store opens at eight. The church is Sunday only.

He got off at Halloran Road at six-thirty-two in the morning, in the dark, in October, at a crossroads.


Marcus did not follow him and I want to note that, because I had followed a child up a highway two days earlier and Marcus’s judgement throughout this was better than mine.

What Marcus did was finish his run, drive back out to Halloran on his own time, and look at it in daylight.

He called me from there.

He said, “There’s a house.”

I said there’s four houses.

And he said, “No. Behind the feed store, back off the road, down a track. There’s a house. There’s a truck outside it and there’s a light on and there’s a kid’s bike on the porch.”


We sat with that for the rest of the weekend, and it was the worst weekend of the whole thing, because a house changes everything and we could not agree on which direction.

My reading: he lives at Halloran. He is getting back there in the morning after being out all night. Whatever is wrong is at Vance, or was, and the laundry is where he goes and Halloran is where he lives.

Marcus’s reading, which turned out to be right: the opposite. He lives at Vance and he is going to Halloran, every morning, deliberately, on a bus that takes him there before seven, and the reason a boy takes a forty-minute bus to a crossroads at six in the morning is that there is something at the crossroads he needs.

I said what would a twelve-year-old need at a crossroads.

And Marcus, who had been thinking about it for two days, said: “A person.”


On Monday I did the thing I should have done in the third week of October, which is that I called the school.

Not the police. The school. I want to explain that choice because I have been asked about it since and I have a clear answer.

The police would have to treat it as a report about a specific child at a specific address, and the first thing that happens after that is people in a car at a door. And I had no idea whose door, or what was behind it, or whether the boy would be better or worse in the twenty minutes after that knock. I had a grey sweatshirt and a laundry and a bus count.

The school has a name and a file and a person whose actual job this is.

I asked for the attendance officer and I got a woman called Ms. Abara, and I said I drive route 12 and I have a boy riding my bus who I do not think is enrolled, and I would like to describe him to you.

She said, “Give me the description.”

I described him. Grey hoodie, eleven or twelve, thin, quiet, sits fourth row right, gets on at Vance.

There was a pause of the kind that tells you the person on the other end has stopped writing.

And Ms. Abara said, “How long has he been riding your bus?”

I said since the third Monday in October. About five weeks.

And she said, “Would you hold on.”


She came back after four minutes and she was different — careful in a way she had not been.

She said, “I’m not able to tell you anything about a student. I want to be clear about that, and I’m going to say some things that aren’t about a student.”

Then she said:

“If a child is riding a bus every day, an adult is putting him on it or he is putting himself on it, and both of those things are worth somebody knowing.”

And: “Halloran Road is not in our attendance area. It’s Kelso district.”

And then, after a pause: “Which means if a child were living at Halloran and riding into our district, he would not be truant here. He would be missing from there.”

I said missing.

And Ms. Abara said, “That’s not the word I used.”

Then she said: “Can you be at the district office at three?”